May Short Story Contest
A just-for-fun short story contest for young writers, ages 9-16.
Congratulations to our Winners!
Ages 9 to 10:
‘The Golden Locket’ by Valentina Pohl Fabris
Ages 11 to 12:
‘The Compass of Heather’ by Talia Millership
Ages 13 to 16:
‘From Beyond Hope’ by Willow Brooke
Thor’s Choice Award: 🏆
‘Label Your Units’ by Meg Bales
Winning Entry (Ages 9-10):
The Golden Locket
© Valentina Pohl Fabris – Age 10, New Zealand
Picture Prompts: All
Up, up high on a dark, snowy night, sitting on top of the tallest mountain in a small kingdom called Montem Nivis was Whitepeak Castle. The moon shone brightly and everything was quiet except for two adults talking (who happen to be Queen Arabell and King Richard) and a 14-year-old girl (who happens to be Princess Victoria) that was frozen in place. She had just gotten out of her room to find out about those mysterious whispers that were keeping her awake when Victoria picked out the sound of her name softly resonating through the hall. She heard hushed tones on the other side of the hard, thick wall.
It was Queen Arabell talking in one of the many 100 rooms in the castle.
“Victoria will turn 15 in two days and I will turn to stone! What shall I do?” she cried, exasperated.
“The only hope to break Witch Cassandra’s evil spell she put on you when you were a child is to find the locket, right?” asked King Richard.
The queen nodded miserably as tears flooded her majestic blue eyes. “We’ve tried everything in our power.”
“But, my dear Queen, there is one last chance! I recall Fairy Queen Titania telling you a sort of riddle. How does it go?”
“In the smallest mountain you shall find, a fierce dragon waiting inside, guarding the locket with all his might,” she recited, full of hope.
“Okay! That’s it!” Richard exclaimed with his heart on fire. “The smallest mountain would be Dragontail Lump. I, myself, will lead our full army, the bravest men in the kingdom to fight the ‘fierce dragon’ and get the golden locket!”
“Hey Richard! Titania also gave me a key. She didn’t say what it was for, though,” said Arabell.
“I’ll get the army ready for the bloody encounter. Now let’s rest,” said the tired king.
The last thing Victoria heard was her father getting up from his armchair. She raced to her bedroom and threw herself on her luxurious four-poster bed, thinking about everything she had witnessed. Her head was spinning with the thought of her mother’s fate. Therefore, not only was her mother in danger; the village was doomed.
She understood that no dragon can wait 32 years without falling asleep. Victoria came to a conclusion: the dragon was sleeping, the army would come, the dragon would wake up, come out of its hiding place and destroy the whole village. It was up to Victoria to save her mum from this wicked curse.
So, when the grandfather clock chimed midnight, the determined princess sprang from her bed and tip-toed quietly to her parents’ chamber. Victoria swiftly unclipped the key that hung on the queen’s neck, put her cloak on, and got on her sled. She remembered to leave a small note for her parents. It simply said ‘Gone to save you Mum, love Vic’ in hurried writing.
Victoria zoomed down the mountain and past the village at break-neck speed. She was going so fast that she didn’t see a rock in her way. The sled tumbled over, making Victoria do an epic face plant. Fortunately, the snow was soft and she didn’t get hurt. The frustrated girl quickly got on her sled again and continued on the short journey to Dragontail Lump. The icy cold wind pressed against her face until she skidded to a stop at her final destination. Victoria circled it cautiously and found a weird-shaped lump; more or less what she expected. She dug into the freezing snow, making her fingers numb. Finally, before Victoria was a massive door, gilded with gold. She pulled the key out of her pocket and slid it into the keyhole. Victoria turned the key with a satisfying ‘click’. She slowly pushed the big door open and stepped into the welcoming but dangerous warmth, while her ears were filled with the sound of loud snoring that echoed throughout the cave. It was the dragon, of course. The cave was more of a chamber; beautiful bronze pillars kept the splendid carved roof from caving in, the walls seemed to be made of pure gold and a grand chandelier lit the room, casting eerie shadows. Victoria looked at everything in awe and snapped back to reality when the silver dragon gave another tremendous snore. Approaching the dragon, Victoria could feel his stinky breath on her. She carefully slipped the precious golden locket from the dragon’s dirty claws. He only snorted and twitched a bit but didn’t wake. Proud and relieved with her success, the young princess got away from there as fast as she could, locking the heavy door behind her.
She handled the locket with extreme gentleness and climbed back up the mountain, eventually arriving at the palace at dawn. Victoria found her parents panicking in the throne room because their only daughter and heir had disappeared and the army was at the King’s command.
She serenely walked in and stood in front of her mother. All went quiet. Before Queen Arabell could wrap her daughter into a big hug, Princess Victoria held out her open hand to reveal the locket which was instantly put on Arabell’s neck. No words are fit to describe that glorious moment of joy. The curse was broken! The village was saved! Hail Princess Victoria the Brave!
Winning Entry (Ages 11-12):
The Compass of Heather
© Talia Millership – Age 12, New Zealand
Picture Prompts: All
The shadows danced around the stone chamber, taunting me as I reassessed my unfortunate situation. It was simple. All I had to do was walk through the door, and to my death. How hard could that be? I had gone too far to turn back now. A bead of sweat trickled down my forehead as I twisted the golden handle.
The Blackwood Forest, my home, was being burnt to the ground. Stupid poachers. The surviving animals were abandoning the forest, and I was following them until I stumbled over a feeble old man. He’d been snoring on the moist ground and had let out a startled yelp as I tripped over his bony body. I apologised and told him he ought to leave because the forest was burning, but he simply smiled, and invited me over to sit. When I stayed standing, he asked what a young girl like me was doing here in the woods, which was pointless since he already seemed to know.
“So, you’re a fugitive and staying in the forest? I imagine when you left your village, you didn’t see this happening. But don’t despair! Seek the Compass of Heather and find the lost sanctuary. You’ll be safe there. You’ll find it at the top of Mount Klimant! You better get going.” he said, and then scurried off into the bushes before I got the chance to say anything. Silence lay over me like a heavy blanket, and I continued to stay still as I pondered my next move.
The quietness was quickly shattered by the roaring flames. My feet made my decision for me. I sprinted for the hill, a single tear rolling down my cheek as I glanced back at the forest for the last time. I would seek the Compass of Heather, though if I did manage to reach the top of this godforsaken mountain only to find snow, the man and I would have a few words, none of which would be friendly.
The base of the mountain was an easy hour’s walk and, fortunately for me, I didn’t run into any trouble. It was winter, so the mountain was covered under a fresh, powdery, sheet of white. Not wanting to waste any time, I started my dangerous ascent to the top of the mountain. Hours passed by in the blink of an eye, and before too long, I had made my way to the summit. The view was breathtaking. Miniature trees stood atop rolling hills. Snow blanketed the scenery. The sun was setting, casting beautiful colours all over the sky. I was on top of the world.
Before I could fully relax, I spotted a carved-out alcove, hiding in the shadows of the rocky face. I supposed the old man hadn’t been lying. Relief washed over me as I made it to the stone entrance unharmed. This all felt too easy, so I prepared for the worst as I examined my surroundings.
I appeared to be in a cave. A single ray of sunlight shone through a crack in the ceiling, illuminating a wooden arch, and beneath that, a wooden door with a golden handle. Strands of ivy decorated the stone wall. Words were printed on the door, ‘Whoever enters the chamber is on a path to De’th. Be warned.’
I stared at the golden handle with newfound dread. Maybe this wasn’t such a good idea.
It wasn’t too late to turn back . . . or was it? The forest was destroyed, my village wouldn’t necessarily welcome me back, and I had already made all this effort toward this stupid compass. If it really could keep me safe . . .
This was my only option. I held my breath as I stepped into the next room.
My jaw dropped. In front of me sat a large chamber, lined with real gold and silver, though it was empty except for a box that lay in the centre of the room, with the copper and gold head of a dragon resting on top of the box. Then my eyes fell to what was on the ledge in front of it. The compass. I slowly inched towards it and my fingers wrapped around the intricate golden object. I admired it for a minute more before turning away, my biggest mistake yet.
“Ahh, now what do we have here? A mortal! I’m De’th, would you like to tell me what you are doing with the Compass of Heather?” I froze in mid-step, then bit by bit, turned around and saw the dragon that had been a statue minutes ago, now very much alive and grinning like a fool. I quickly weighed my options, then I stared him in the eye as I responded, “Not really.” before I dashed for the door.
I made it halfway across the chamber before the door slammed shut, yet I refused to believe that I was locked in here. I twisted the handle and pushed with all my might, but it didn’t budge. I groaned loudly as I turned back to face the dragon. Then, realisation struck me.
“De’th? So, you mean on the door, it meant you and not. . . ” The dragon nodded its goofy head. I cursed under my breath. How could I not have seen?
I sighed as I responded, “Fine. I was told to ‘seek the Compass of Heather’ and to ‘find the lost sanctuary,’ because my forest burnt down.”
He let out a booming laugh, and I gritted my teeth. He continued to grin as he said, “Why didn’t you just say so? Open the compass and you have a one-way ticket to Lakewood Grove! Enjoy the trip.” Before I could say a word, the compass opened by itself. As I disappeared in a brilliant burst of light, I couldn’t shake the feeling that this wasn’t the end.
Winning Entry (Ages 13-16):
From Beyond Hope
© Willow Brooke – Age 15, New Zealand
Picture Prompt: #1
You want a story, little one? Very well, I will tell you one that has never been told until now. And it is important – oh, so important…
No, it is not a fairy tale, or a myth or legend. It is not a patched-together story, but one newly-forged. You may never hear it again, but do not forget it.
Are you settled? Then I will begin. But first I must ask you a question.
How far would you go to save someone you love?
*
You may have heard that there is a place at the end of the world where you can find your heart’s desire. A bottomless pool inside a mountain cavern, perhaps, to which you whisper your greatest longing. And with that – poof! – it appears and your problems are solved.
It’s a rumour, and it’s false.
True, you may ask for your heart’s desire – but only ask. And you do not go to a mountain cave to do so, because it is a door that is at world’s end. A door with secrets beyond…
*
What’s that, little one? You ask if there is not only sea and sky at the end of the world? In a way – and in a way not. To get beyond the end of the world, one must sail over the horizon; but that is the point of no return. There is an island at world’s end itself, and it is on that which the door stands. It is the most difficult journey any mortal can make, and return from.
Are you ready for me to continue?
*
There were many people who travelled to that place, but few came away with what they had gone for. Yet all their faces were hopeful when they returned home, though none would tell of what they had seen at the end of their journey.
Once there was a girl, and she had a friend who was close to her heart; and in many respects he was a good friend. He made some wrong choices, like everyone does; but unlike others he did not correct his mistakes. And he turned to an evil path.
And the girl watched him change, and cried out in her heart. And she was afraid for both him and herself, for she knew that someday there would be a cross-roads, and she would have to choose between her friend and the things that she stood for. She was desperate to help him, but he pushed her away; and she could only watch him stumble along a path that grew darker and rougher.
At last, when she could bear it no longer, she staked everything on one final hope and travelled to the end of the world. And when she stood at last in front of the door there, she knocked on it without hesitation. After the echoes had faded, she heard a voice calling, “Come in.”
So she opened the door, and stepped into the room beyond, wooden-floored and with sunlight falling through tall windows. A table was set in its centre, and behind it there sat a man in a chair, facing her. As she stood in the doorway, uncertain, he looked up and smiled.
“What is your purpose here?” he asked.
And she told him why she had come, in all detail. As she spoke, the man stood up and came round the table towards her, and she saw that he was young, only a few years older than she. He looked at her intently, and when she had finished her story, feeling a great weariness, she looked at him for his answer.
But in his face was compassion, and she already knew his reply before he spoke. And she pleaded before he could speak, “I have come so far to ask for this; can you not grant it to me?”
He shook his head sadly; and seeing the finality in his gaze, she knew he would never change his mind.
“I am sorry,” he said. “Some things I grant – but not something like this. You cannot know how your wish would change your friend. It is not right that one should change another’s destiny; each forges their own life. They cannot be changed in such a way by others, save by natural means. If you want your friend to change, you must help him to.”
But she cried, “Do you think I haven’t tried? It is all I have done, these past months. I put all I had into straining towards you, my last hope. And it is for nothing,” she finished, sitting down on the floor and hugging her knees to her chest. “Nothing. What are you here for if you can’t give people what they want?”
“I give people hope,” he said. “Few things retain their worth if they are received without effort. I cannot make your friend turn back to the clear path, but if you wait at the crossroads for him and stay faithful, someday they will return.”
“Be strong, and not follow him,” she said quietly, anger dissipated. “I understand. But it will be hard – very hard.”
He stood up then, and put a gentle hand on her shoulder. “I understand,” he said. “Trust me in this, and do not give up on your friend. Perhaps in time he will come back to you.”
“Perhaps,” she said, and rose to go. “Thank you. I will not forget this.”
He dipped his head, acknowledging. “Perhaps someday we shall meet again,” he said, and smiled.
And then the door swung shut before her, and she was out in the forest once more.
*
And that is the end, little one…for now at least. Yes, of course there is a happy ending. I always have happy endings.
What did you say? That the girl in the story reminds you of me? What a strange idea! It is time, I think, that you went to sleep. Good night, little one.
Strange, the ways truth is found.
THOR’S CHOICE AWARD: 🏆
Label Your Units
© Meg Bales – Age 14, United States of America
Picture Prompt: #3
The war of the Auriaxiallad started completely by accident.
The felers and the wolvlins had both been invited to the once-a-century festivities in the Auriaxiallad kingdom when the Auriaxiallan elves showed off their Dragon Box. Both sides were on shaky terms with each other, but neither wanted to be rude, so they each sent a delegation to the party.
It was late. The drinks had been plentiful. The terrace and gardens had not been screened for catnip and squirrels. General Tsaria the Siamese and General Leral the Corgi were not known for their impulse control.
The dragon box was a sight to behold, over three feet to a side, with a masterfully crafted statue of a dragon draped across the top. It was prophesied that when pigs fly, the Dragon would come to life, open the Box, and lead the Auriaxiallans to peace and prosperity.
So it is not surprising that both generals reacted positively when they wheeled the Box out.
Now, if this had been any other pair of generals with poor impulse control, everything would have been fine. But a feler’s purring is easily mistaken for a wolvlin’s hostile growling, and the joyous wagging of a wolvlin tail looks very much like the lashing tail of an angry feler…
The quietness was quickly shattered by the roaring flames.
Tsaria and Leral admired the statue for about thirty seconds, noticed each other appreciating the art, and panicked. Both drew their swords and leaped at each other, prompting panicking from everyone else at the party, which quickly devolved into a free-for-all.
Most of the participants were expert magic users, but no one thought to start spellcasting until ten minutes in, when the musicians got bored of music that didn’t match the mood. The musicians hired to provide background music normally played at taverns, so they ignored the brawling cat and dog people and switched to anime fight music, causing everyone to remember magical attacks were a thing.
Fur flew. Things exploded. Anime quotes were exchanged. It was mayhem.
Eventually, though, the brawl wound to a halt, as people left to get backup, or got knocked out, or fell asleep on their feet. War was then declared on both sides, albeit with some technical issues.
The wolvins’ military code was all Shakespeare quotes, you see, and the announcement “Once more unto the breach, dear friends,” got mixed up with “let the sky rain potatoes,” resulting in a lot of wolfperson soldiers going to McDonalds instead of the armory. The repost then got Autocorrected as “unto the BEACH,” which led even more units astray.
The felers were not exempt either, though. The Felerking got interrupted midway through posting the announcement, and four-year-old princess Maniya decided to embellish the half-done Email. She somehow even switched the keyboard to Japanese mode and sprayed Kanji all over the declaration of war. The only coherent thing she wrote was “knit a sweater of ants,” which, unfortunately, was taken literally by a Japanese-speaking feler.
Eventually, though, war began in earnest. A whole string of battles were fought in succession right at the start, when the wolvlin vanguard surprised the feler rearguard, and the felers outflanked the wolvlin left flank whilst being ambushed by the wolvlin right flank, and then the wolvlin rearguard ambushed the feler middle flank, and meanwhile the feler vanguard was ambushing the wolvlin midguard, who were watching Avengers. After that, the wolvlin left flank confused its right flank with the feler rear guard and ambushed the wrong group, opening the way for the feler vanguard to move on from ambushing the midguard to ambushing the left and right wolvlin flanks together. The wolvlin vanguard then caught the feler crossguard unawares near Route Fifteen, but were themselves caught unawares by both the feler right flank and wolvlin rear guard, who were confusing the crossguard with the feler rear guard and the wolvlin left flank, respectively. After that, it was the wolvlin rearguard’s turn to be surprised by the feler vanguard.
This confused mess of battles was henceforth known as the Feler/Wolvlin Guardguard Gorsebush battles, numbered I through IXIW.
Once the outflanking and ambushing was done, though, both sides assembled on opposite sides of a field. Everyone was tired, annoyed, and confused, and no one wanted to fight anymore. Then a thunderstorm hit. When it was over, everyone was having such a bad day that both sides just decided to surrender.
This caused one more misunderstanding.
In feler culture, a white flag is a flag of peace, and a black flag is a flag of war. In wolvlin culture, it’s the opposite. White means death, emptiness, plague, and all sorts of bad things. Black means peace, nothing to hide.
So when the felers came out waving a white flag, and the wolvlins came out waving a black flag, both sides assumed the other was rejecting their surrender and, in fact, wanted to go again.
The brawl began again anew, under a rousing cry of “these felers/wolvlins are crazy!”
Three hours later, only a dozen from each side were left standing when the Auriaxiallan elves interfered.
The combatants were blown back when the elves arrived in the center of the field, with the Dragon Box. It was a bit dented from the brawl at the party, much to everyone’s embarrassment.
“STOP THIS BRAWL NOW!” the dragon statue announced. Everyone blinked. “STOP–THIS–BRAWL–NOW!” the statue repeated, glaring at the combatants. “I WASN’T SUPPOSED TO AWAKEN FOR YEARS YET, BUT THIS IS IMPORTANT. WHY ARE YOU FIGHTING?”
“They started it!”
“No, THEY started it!”
“You started it and then wanted to go AGAINNNNNNNNN!”
“No, it was you who came out waving a black flag!”
“Exactly! That means stoppit we want to be done!”
“No, black means war!”
“Does not!”
“Does too!”
“AH,” the dragon statue boomed. “SO THIS ENTIRE MESS WAS A MISUNDERSTANDING. GO YOUR SEPARATE WAYS, YOU LUNATICS.” With that, it and the elves vanished in another puff of smoke.
“So…” one of the felers said awkwardly, “anyone…want to play a board game or something?”
Honourable Mention:
The Adventure Begins
© Katherine Pringle – Age 9, Canada
Picture Prompts: All
“Homeschooling is fun, but I’m glad it’s over for the year, now we have time to explore the forest,” sighed Airen dreamily as he ran his finger through his black hair.
They were walking through the forest five miles away from their house on a sunny, hot day in July.
Airen’s sister Kate said, “Yes, me too.” She climbed up onto a giant boulder. She looked down at the boulder and said, “Hey, there’s a dragon symbol carved on the side of this boulder.”
“Look,” Airen pointed to a pile of broken glass. “This must be some kind of ruin. There are broken down walls and rotten floor boards.”
Then they saw more ruins.
Honourable Mention:
Finding Father
© Elm Rivers – Age 11, New Zealand
Picture Prompts: #1 and #3
I walk towards the door, frightened – though I don’t know why. Why did it have to be today? I thought for the thousandth time. Then again as I always do I say to myself, You want to find out what happened to your father, don’t you?
“Luca,” the call echoed in the silent hall. “Time for lunch.”
“Yes, Mother,” I call back. I start down the hall then stop and look around. The door seems to be calling me. I shake off the notion and run down the hall.
“Luca, where have you been?” Mother asks.
“I – um – er – was…
Honourable Mention:
That Wasn’t as Hard as It Should Have Been
© Rose Whitacre – Age 13, United States
Picture Prompt: #3
Eyannah was nervous. It was her first day working in Sir Onaan’s magical museum. Her current task was tidying the Sculpture Gallery. Eyannah surveyed the room, trying to decide where to start.
Her gaze lighted on a statue of a golden dragon. Laying on it was a ragged cloak and a tarnished, dented compass. The dragon, covered with a thick layer of dust, was behind a small sign. Eyannah couldn’t read, so she ignored the sign and strode past it. She lifted the out-of-place items and began dusting the dragon thoroughly.
She was too busy to notice the statue’s claws twitching.
Once she finished the statue, Eyannah took the cloak and compass to the lost-and-found and began working on the other side of the room.
“You can make anything by writing.”
– C.S. Lewis
Honourable Mention:
The Adventure Begins
© Katherine Pringle – Age 9, Canada
Picture Prompts: All
“Homeschooling is fun, but I’m glad it’s over for the year, now we have time to explore the forest,” sighed Airen dreamily as he ran his finger through his black hair.
They were walking through the forest five miles away from their house on a sunny, hot day in July.
Airen’s sister Kate said, “Yes, me too.” She climbed up onto a giant boulder. She looked down at the boulder and said, “Hey, there’s a dragon symbol carved on the side of this boulder.”
“Look,” Airen pointed to a pile of broken glass. “This must be some kind of ruin. There are broken down walls and rotten floor boards.”
Then they saw more ruins.
“Wow, I didn’t know that this was here!” said Airen.
“What is that?” asked Kate, as she pointed to a big brown thing made of wood that was not rotten.
“I don’t know,” replied Airen. “It looks almost as brown as your hair.”
“Hey! Well, let’s go and see what it is.” She said, trying to change the subject.
“Okay,” Airen agreed. They saw a door that had vines all over it. Airen saw something shining on the ground. He bent to pick the pieces up.
“They’re shards of metal!” Airen observed. “This place looks old, these could be valuable. I’ll put them in my pocket.”
“Should we go through the door?” questioned Kate.
“Um… I guess we could, but we have to be back before supper, remember?” said Airen slowly as he touched the soft wood. He realized it had pictures of dragons carved into it.
When they went through the door they stepped into snow and saw tall, snowy mountain peaks stretching up around them.They were confused as to why they were not cold. A strong gust of wind caused them to look up.
“Dragons!” cried Kate. “They are so close that I can see their white scales!” She yelled as Airen cried,
“Quick! Hide!” he pushed her behind a snow bank.
After the dragons had flown out of sight behind a mountain Airen said, “let’s go up the mountain, I think there is something at the top.”
Kate agreed and they started up the mountain. As they went up Airen said dreamily, “Wow, I can’t beleve magic is actually real.”
“I know, right?” exclaimed Kate.
When they reached the top they saw a big castle with a big door and pointy red roofs and Kate said, “It looks like a castle. Let’s go inside,” she said as she looked at his blue eyes. He looked at her blue eyes too and said,
“As long as we can be back before dinner.” He pulled and the door opened with a creak. In the courtyard they were surprised that there were realistic statues of humans that looked older then either of them.
“Let’s go inside of the palace,” Kate said.
“Okay,” agreed Airen. So they went inside.They were astonished when they saw a dragon.
“I think it’s a statue,”said Kate.
“Phew!” said Airen. “Hey there’s a box under the dragon.”
“Should we try to open it?” asked Kate.
“Okay, but you must stand back.”
“Don’t be so protective of me. I’m ten years old, not a little kid any more!”
“Fine,” said Airen. He reached out for the box and the dragon lunged at him, teeth bared. Airen jumped back. He reached into his pocket to grab a shard of metal to protect himself, but instead he pulled out a whole dagger! Somehow the pieces had formed together. The dragon stopped in surprise.
“Where did you get that”? The dragon growled
“By a door in the Birch Tree Forest.”
“Ah it must be the Elcome door in the Great Wizard’s house. That dagger is a key to this box that the Great Wizard ordered me to guard until somebody brings me the dagger. It has been one thousand years, but I never thought it would be a little boy who brought it to me.”
“Well, can I open it?” asked Airen.
“Yes,” replied the dragon as he moved aside.
Airen spotted a keyhole on the front of the box. He carefully inserted the dagger and turned it. It opened with barely a whisper. Inside the box was a chain with a pendant on it.
“This is a magical artifact,” the dragon informed him. “It creates a force field and controls time. I haven’t seen the Great Wizard in many moons and the people of this castle have been stuck in time for many years.”
Then Kate remembered when they first entered the palace and exclaimed in surprise and excitement, “The statues! They’re real people!”
“Yes, and I need your help to free them and find the Great Wizard”.
“Okay,” agreed Airen and Kate at the same time. It sounded like the beginning of an adventure.
Honourable Mention:
Finding Father
© Elm Rivers – Age 11, New Zealand
Picture Prompts: #1 and #3
I walk towards the door, frightened – though I don’t know why. Why did it have to be today? I thought for the thousandth time. Then again as I always do I say to myself, You want to find out what happened to your father, don’t you?
“Luca,” the call echoed in the silent hall. “Time for lunch.”
“Yes, Mother,” I call back. I start down the hall then stop and look around. The door seems to be calling me. I shake off the notion and run down the hall.
“Luca, where have you been?” Mother asks.
“I – um – er – was…”
Just then Lila spills the milk, and I thank her silently for the distraction. Eating quickly, I bring my dishes to the bench and am about to leave when Mother says, “Not so fast, Luca! You need to help with the chores.”
I sigh. “Can’t Lila and Michelle help?” I ask.
“No, I want – ”
“But I want to do Luca’s chores!” Lila cuts in.
“No, Lila,” says Mother. “You need your nap.”
“Don’t want a nap! Me want to help Luca!” cries Lila. But Mother whisks her off to bed.
I slowly and carefully edge to the door. Once I’m out in the hall, I run until I reach the mystery door, as I call it. Now I walk towards it, and stop, wondering if Father would want me to do this. I think hard, trying to remember all I can about him, which isn’t much. He went away before I turned five; I don’t know why. But that’s what I want to find out.
I move toward the door. One step. Two steps. I’m there. I take hold of the door knob and twist it. The door swings open.
I gasp. In the middle of the room there’s a chest, and on the chest is a golden dragon. I take a step back in surprise, but then step forward again. It looks dead (I hope). I advance across the room, feeling watched, though by what I don’t know. Looking more closely round the room, I notice many doors set in the walls. Some of the doors look like they don’t have any handles. Some of them have many mysterious patterns and symbols, like the door I came through.
I look behind me to make sure the door I came through is still open. It is, but it is slowly closing. I run to it, but it’s too late. It slams shut. I bang my fists against the door. When nothing happens I flop down on the floor and lean my back against it. I think about crying but don’t, because for a boy of eleven I think it’s babyish. Crying is for people Lila’s age (three).
“I’m sorry,” a voice says. I look around me.
“Who’s there?” I ask.
“Only me,” the voice says.
“Who’s me?” I ask.
“Alden Lendal,” the voice answers.
“Father!” I cry.
“Luca, why are you here?”
“I came looking for you. Where are you? I can’t see you.”
“I’m in the cage to your left – at least, I think it’s your left.”
I look to my left, and see bars. And behind the bars is a tired-looking man.
“Be careful not to go too close to the dragon,” Father warns.
“Why” I ask.
“Now that’s a long story! But I may as well tell you if you’re to understand anything,” explains father. “So a long time ago, when you were eight, Michelle was five and Lila was just born, I felt restless. I was always thinking about my father and a story he used to tell me about a door, and a dragon. And, as I found later, the door he mentioned was the door at the end of the hall. So I decided to go on a quest to find out if there was a dragon behind the door, as the story said, and if it were dead or alive.
“I did not tell anyone where I was going. I left early in the morning when everyone else was sleeping. I walked down the hall and was about to go out the back door when I looked back down the hall and saw a door that looked like the one my father described in the story. I walk toward it and look at the mysterious designs on it. I opened the door and looked into the room beyond, and saw, to my surprise, that there was a dragon on a chest in the middle of the room. I walked across to it and when I reached it and gently touched the dragon, it suddenly sprung to life.
“The dragon got me down on the floor in a moment and dragged me across the room into a cell. And here I’ve remained ever since,” my father finishes.
“But how can I free you, Father?” I ask.
“There’s a key round the dragon’s neck, but you need to get to it without touching your skin to its scales. If you do touch it, it will wake up and throw you into a cell, and you’ll be just like me. Alone for years, with no way of escape.”
I look round for something I can use to get the key off the dragon and see a stick lying on the floor, next to the chest. I move quietly over and pick it up, sliding it gently under the chain round the dragon’s neck that has the key on it. Slowly, inch by inch, I lift it over the dragon’s head.
As soon as it’s off, I let go of the stick, catching the chain before it falls. I run to my father’s cell, fitting the key in the lock. As soon as I turn the key, and the cell door opens, the door I came through opens as well. Father runs out and hugs me, and we both run to the open door together and shut it behind us.
“Free at last,” says Father. “I need some coffee!’
Honourable Mention:
That Wasn’t as Hard as It Should Have Been
© Rose Whitacre – Age 13, USA
Picture Prompt: #3
Eyannah was nervous. It was her first day working in Sir Onaan’s magical museum. Her current task was tidying the Sculpture Gallery. Eyannah surveyed the room, trying to decide where to start.
Her gaze lighted on a statue of a golden dragon. Laying on it was a ragged cloak and a tarnished, dented compass. The dragon, covered with a thick layer of dust, was behind a small sign. Eyannah couldn’t read, so she ignored the sign and strode past it. She lifted the out-of-place items and began dusting the dragon thoroughly.
She was too busy to notice the statue’s claws twitching.
Once she finished the statue, Eyannah took the cloak and compass to the lost-and-found and began working on the other side of the room.
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The next day, Eyannah found the museum in a complete uproar. A doorman told her that the dragon had come alive during the night and was burning parts of the city, and Sir Onaan wanted to speak with whoever had tidied the Sculpture Gallery.
Eyannah hurried toward the knight’s study and knocked cautiously on the door.
“Come in,” said Sir Onaan. Heart pounding furiously, Eyannah pushed open the door. The red-bearded knight sat behind a large wooden desk in the center of the study. Onaan wore a grave expression. “You’re the girl who cleaned the Sculpture Gallery, correct?”
“Yes, Sir.”
“There’s a sign in front of that golden dragon. Why didn’t you read it?”
Eyannah looked down. “I can’t read, Sir. But I will fix this mess.”
“Ah.” Sir Onaan sighed. “Removing the magical compass and cloak awoke the dragon, so to re-enchant the creature, you must place both around his neck. My son Iret will help you because he made the dragon angry so that it started attacking the city. He should be in the Portrait Room. Understood?”
Eyannah nodded.
“Then go.”
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Eyannah had met Iret before, and she couldn’t believe he would be any help. Maybe she could use him as bait.
She found him sitting on the floor underneath a moving picture of a haughty-looking princess. “Your father says you’re to help me.”
Iret’s head snapped up. “What are you doing here?”
“Your father says you’re to help me,” Eyannah repeated. “Come on.” Iret followed, grumbling. They stopped by the lost-and-found to retrieve the magical items.
“What am I helping you with, anyway?” Iret asked.
“Saving the city,” she answered shortly.
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The dragon was torching the eastern quadrant when they arrived. Eyannah had told Iret what they had to do on the way there. Now that they saw the dragon’s might, both were feeling quite a bit of trepidation.
“We could try talking to it,” Eyannah suggested.
Iret looked at her incredulously. “Are you crazy? Just walk up and say hello to that monster? No thanks.”
“It’s worth a shot. I’m going to try it.” She started walking toward the dragon, which was swooping above, flame pouring from its maw. Iret sighed and ran to catch up.
The dragon landed when it saw them, seemingly surprised to be challenged by two small, young creatures without weapons. Then it saw the compass and cloak they carried and hissed.
“Why do you seek my imprisonment, young one?”
“You’re hurting our city,” Eyannah said in response, surprised the dragon could speak. Its rough voice seemed to come from everywhere at once.
“I could leave, if that is the only reason.”
“That might be the best for everyone,” said Eyannah.
Iret gaped at her. “Did you just tell the dragon that it’s best for everyone if it hurts the city? That’s very, very wrong, Eyannah.”
“I didn’t say that. Weren’t you listening?”
“He cannot hear me, young one. But you have not given me any reason not to hurt those who trapped me.”
“We aren’t the ones who made you a statue. You’ve been in the museum longer than anyone can remember.” She turned to Iret. “Is it true you can’t hear the dragon speak?”
“You can?” he asked. Eyannah nodded. “Odd.”
“I do have a name, you know.”
“You haven’t told us – me, then – what it is,” she reminded.
“Brintle, at your service.”
“Eyannah and Iret at yours.”
Iret had been surveying the scene with frustration during the whole conversation.
“Can you tell this dragon to leave already?” he whispered to Eyannah.
“His name is Brintle,” she whispered back, “and you can tell him yourself.”
“Fine.” Iret raised his voice. “O Most Esteemed and Adored Dragon Brintle, I humbly beseech you to leave these mountains in order to preserve both your elegant living body and the remainder of our beloved city. If you would fulfill this request, both myself and my companion would be in your debt forevermore. Thank you for considering this proposal, even if you decide not to accept.”
Brintle turned an amused eye on the boy, and Eyannah could barely hide her giggles.
“Does he always talk like that?”
“When he wants to make a favorable impression,” she answered, fighting a smile.
“Tell him I accept his terms. I will leave, but I will eventually return for you both to repay your debts to me.”
Eyannah told Iret what the dragon had said.
“Farewell, young ones.”
And with that, Brintle flew higher and higher until he was nothing but a gold speck against the sky.
“I guess we owe a dragon a favor, then,” Iret said. “I’m not looking forward to that.”
They stared at each other.
Eyannah smiled. “That wasn’t as hard as it should have been.”
Iret nodded. “I wonder why you could hear him, but not me.”
“We’ll have to ask your dad,” Eyannah suggested.
“Yeah.” Iret paused. “What should we do with those?” He gestured toward the cloak and the compass.
“We could keep them,” she stated. “They might have some amazing undiscovered powers.”
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Three years later…
A golden silhouette circled above the city, casting an enormous shadow below. Eyannah glanced up. “I guess it’s time.” She went to find Iret.
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