The 3×3 Short Story Competition

 

December 2020 ✨

Our awesome participants (aged 9-14) wrote a 500-1,000 word story beginning with one of these 3 opening lines:

Opening Line #1: ✨

The dragon scrambled down the chimney and gazed about the room. “I’m sorry,” he said. “Did you think I was Santa?”

Opening Line #2: ✨

Silvery voices drifted in through the open door, yet only a small stag stood on the moonlit path. Its antlers glittered with ice, and the look in its eyes seemed to say, “Come, there’s something I must show you.”

Opening Line #3: ✨

“I wouldn’t open that if I were you.” The old man pointed to a box in the corner tied up with too many ribbons. “It might be the worst present of all.” Perfectly harmless, said the box’s label.

The winner (Clover Alsop, Aged 11-12, from New Zealand) got to choose their prize from 3 amazing book options:

  • ‘The Mysterious Benedict Society’ by Trenton Lee Stewart
  • ‘Keeper of the Lost Cities’ by Shannon Messenger
  • ‘The Ruins of Gorlan’ (Ranger’s Apprentice Bk 1) by John Flanagan

Winning Entry and Honourable Mentions below!

Winning Entry:

The Elements – The Water Quest

© Clover Alsop

“I wouldn’t open that if I were you.” The old man pointed to a box in the corner. “It might be the worst present of all.”

Perfectly harmless, said the box’s label.

Clara felt drawn towards the box like a moth towards flame and her fingers itched to feel it. She walked towards the table that the box was displayed on. On the lid was a fox’s head with its pointed snout and cunning eyes, and her fingers traced the border, a pattern of flowers and leaves.

“Why might it be the worst present of all?” she asked the old man curiously.

“That would be telling,” he replied mysteriously. “You must find that out for yourself.”…

Honourable Mentions:

Sophia

Aged 13-14

Honourable mention for fabulous writing quality (especially the use of dialogue tags and action beats), and a story that left us wanting more!

The dragon scrambled down the chimney and gazed about the room. “I’m sorry,” he said. “Did you think I was Santa?” he asked, as he watched the small child who looked about seven or eight.

The child had her brown hair in pigtails and was wearing a pink old-fashioned nightgown and holding a teddy bear. She reached a hand toward the dragon. He looked at her hand and let her pick him up. She smiled and headed to the kitchen to get him a snack…

Jack Irvine

Aged 11-12

Honourable mention for fast-paced action and an exciting conclusion that tied back into the opening line.

“I wouldn’t open that if I were you.” The old man pointed to a box in the corner. “It might be the worst present of all.”

Perfectly harmless, said the box’s label.

Just then a rodent scampered into the ally way, it scampered to the box and gave the large decorated box a sniff, at the same instant a hand reached out, snatching the grey furry body. The rodent squealed before disappearing. A bright light started flickering as the box slowly opened,

Clarence slowly backed away…

Willow Brooke

Aged 11-12

Honourable mention for an intriguing story that beautifully weaved in the opening line.

It Came Upon a Midnight Clear

Silvery voices drifted in through the open door, yet only a small stag stood on the moonlit path. Its antlers glittered with ice, and the look in its eyes seemed to say, “Come, there’s something I must show you.”
I took a step towards the deer, moving slowly so as not frighten it. But the flash of a mirror from the house behind me in the moonlight startled it. It turned and dashed into the forest. Dismayed, I stared after it. I had wanted to get closer, to stroke it…

“You can make anything by writing.”

– C. S. Lewis